
By Eric Jones Jr.
He had finally done it. The science community could no longer look down at him. He had created the stuff of legends. Now others would grovel at his feet instead of the other way around. He imagined his former wife reluctantly crawling back to make amends. Actually, screw her. With the fame and money, he could get a younger, prettier version. This would be his greatest achievement. A world-changer. Sure, there would be fighting, wars. Powerful people would kill to get their hands on his creation. Some would die. Some would live. Forever perhaps. Small price to pay for eternal youth.
A new twist on the Eternal Life quest. Liked it.
Thank you very much
Had you not been limited to 101 words, you could have ended your story with the traditional, “Bwah – ha – ha – ha!!!”
The thought did cross my mind lol. Thanks
Good job. A short micro with a point.
Thank you
Well written. Nice twist.
Thanks. Appreciate the comment