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The Grey

October 28, 2021 4 Comments

By M.D. Smith, IV

I languish in this lonely, unfriendly place. Neither daylight nor dark, but a mindless grey envelops me. I hear the chilling wind build and wane, whistling through the dead branches of a lone tree sitting on a nameless hill. Its skeleton bears witness to the nothingness of this moment.

A Dali clock face draping over a weathered limb would make the scene complete. Time drags. Faceless forms dance in front of me like ghosts swirling about each other.

Then, grey vanishes. The world is bright and sunny. A handsome boy stands in front of me, asking, “Do you want to dance?”

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  1. Helen Connell says

    October 28, 2021 at 7:10 am

    Lovely ending ?

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    • Mike Patrick Jackson says

      October 28, 2021 at 1:04 pm

      This is one of those stories that can have several interpretations. It makes a person think!

      Reply
  2. Heidi Ruby Miller says

    October 28, 2021 at 2:18 pm

    Moody and atmospheric with a hopeful ending–beautiful.

    Reply
  3. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    October 29, 2021 at 6:40 pm

    Lovely vivid descriptions… sweet ending… kudos …

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