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The Incident

November 28, 2017 3 Comments

The Incident

By Bill Diamond

“It happened in a flash. I was paying attention, officer. I always drive with just one hand. It’s comfortable. I’m a good driver, aside from those speeding tickets. The speed limit says twenty. But, no one drives that slowly. The road was slick. Regardless, I drive it daily and know all the bends and dips. I was thinking about an argument at work. The meeting hadn’t gone well and it made me mad. The phone buzzed. I reached for it just to check who was calling. Suddenly, a small pink dress ran into the street… There was a horrible, squishing thud…”

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  1. Phyllis Stewart-Ruffin says

    November 28, 2017 at 10:54 am

    Enjoyable for what is not said and the picture that comes to mind.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    November 28, 2017 at 5:32 pm

    An excellent reminder to all of us to pay attention to our driving…at all times! Good story.

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  3. Alex Tolansky says

    November 29, 2017 at 11:34 am

    Clever how the light-hearted tone is abruptly changed to seriousness with a moral edge.

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