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The Island Light

September 19, 2016 3 Comments

The Island Light

By Grace D'Aguiler

She was not my mother.

At the stoplight that day, I saw them: my hero and a stranger.

Even at 10, I knew they stood too close.

His kiss was brief, but made a secret promise.

I stayed on that jangly San Juan corner, transfixed. A big coffee momma dangled a three-year-old on her generous hip and shared her billowy, linen skirt with me.

She was not my mother.

Salsa music drifted over from a bodega. There would be no street dancing.

I would not walk here after school again.

The island light changed.

I ran home to Mami.

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  1. b. says

    September 19, 2016 at 11:13 am

    Clever! I would like to read more of your work.

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  2. azsalinas23 says

    September 19, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    Fantastic story!

    Reply
  3. Andy says

    September 21, 2016 at 3:44 am

    I love the description in this Grace. It feels like I’m there! Very nice.

    Reply

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