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The Jitterbug Star

November 20, 2018 5 Comments

The Jitterbug Star

By Pene Morley

I asked Harold to scatter my ashes off the cliffs in Dover, but he’s gone and put me in a vase on the mantelpiece instead—the stupid bugger. I know why he’s done it; he can’t stand the thought of me dancing the Jitterbug up there in the stars with Joe.

He always hated it when Joe gave me all that attention. Of course, he couldn’t say so—not in those days—not even when Joe got killed. I reckon the only reason he married me was because it was the closest he could get to holding Joe in his arms.

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  1. Anna says

    November 20, 2018 at 7:03 am

    This is a well written piece with a nice twist at the end. I really enjoyed it.

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  2. James Bonnor says

    November 20, 2018 at 7:44 am

    Oh, sweetly delivered and revealed

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  3. cascondaville says

    November 20, 2018 at 8:27 am

    Loved this!

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  4. Susan says

    November 21, 2018 at 6:07 pm

    Wow! What a great story told in so few words!

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  5. Neil Tarpey says

    November 26, 2018 at 9:34 pm

    I enjoyed it. The final three words not only twist, but also bring Joe to life and reveal a lot about Harold, “the stupid bugger.”

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