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The Last Commute

August 2, 2023 3 Comments

By Allen Ashley

Accustomed to long journeys to and from work on stuffy, crowded underground trains, now you are crossing the River Styx where a cold fog masks any evidence of movement. Even the surly boatman Charon can’t be seen. Earlier, he had scooped up your inadequate loose change and then removed all your credit cards for good measure.

Becalmed. Like the boat is a train in a tunnel waiting for a red light to clear.

Commuter life is so ingrained that all you really think of missing is the daily back and forth.

Except the next stop is Hades, where this boat terminates.

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  1. Valli says

    August 2, 2023 at 12:22 pm

    Chapeau …

    Reply
  2. Michael W King says

    August 7, 2023 at 8:11 pm

    I’ll be thinking about your story the next time I’m stuck in traffic. Great job!

    Reply
  3. Allen Ashley says

    August 31, 2023 at 3:24 pm

    Thanks very much for your kind comments.

    Reply

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