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The Last Note

December 29, 2015 4 Comments

The Last Note

By David J Nolan III

A piano sits among the charred framing of the house from which we took shelter. The ash matches the dark keys, but few still proudly show white. The memory of sitting on my father’s lap as he played symphonies is being replaced by the demolished atrocity in front of me. This negative thought gives way to more recent times of shouting matches throughout the house. My father was always right; he always won. As I reach down to depress a key, the silence that follows is my muse. The smell of gasoline on my jacket is confirmation that I have won.

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  1. Tom (from Rhode Island) says

    December 29, 2015 at 9:29 am

    Wow!

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  2. Bubbala says

    December 29, 2015 at 10:11 am

    Beautiful 🙂

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  3. Dave says

    December 29, 2015 at 10:48 am

    Excellent. Ending really pops.

    Reply
  4. Kathleen Cahill says

    December 29, 2015 at 2:23 pm

    Thoroughly enjoyed this.

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