By Angie Dent
Alison nervously looked around. It was the strangest shop she’d ever encountered. The wares were neatly presented from floor to ceiling, showcased with soft lighting.
“Take your time,” the owner whispered. “You will know which one is right.”
She gently touched a beautifully carved wooden option, too formal. A woven model, interesting but not elegant. Black? Inappropriate.
Turning her attention to the last wall, she knew instantly. Lilac, slight sparkle, shiny silver handles and more importantly, her mum’s favourite colour. Sensing her mum’s approval, she indicated her choice of coffin with a heavy heart and relief this painful task was over.
What a surprise ending!. I thought the main character was shopping for housewares and home furnishings.
Different! Well done
Brilliant.
Yes, I thought it was some kind of retail therapy for homeware. Then I felt a shiver down my spine. Great writing 🙂
When I kick the bucket I promise I won’t care what the coffin looks like. Good story.
Such a weird yet perfect twist. Keep writing.
Angie, I love to read your amazing short stories. Keep writing & sharing. ?
Aw thanks Sue, hope you and the family are all well and getting back to normal.
Didn’t guess that ending, thought she was going to buy a lamp or something. Excellent love your short stories. X
Great story Angie. Good twist .