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The Life You Spend

February 26, 2016 4 Comments

The Life You Spend

By Gregg Howard

David Herrington got out of juvenile detention on a Friday after doing thirty days, having taken a vandalism rap to protect a feckless girl he thought he loved.  When he went to see her, Joleen told him she was pregnant by another guy, and he went away crying.

That Saturday night at a party she was laughing as she told the story; how it wasn’t even true. None of it.

And that Sunday morning David hung himself. With a piece of green hose. From the apple tree in his grandma’s backyard. He was just seventeen with black eyes like a raven.

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  1. Anarita Botelho says

    February 26, 2016 at 9:50 am

    So predictable!

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    February 26, 2016 at 1:28 pm

    So sad; so true to life.

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  3. TISA GARRISON says

    February 26, 2016 at 10:19 pm

    Powerful.

    Reply
  4. Tony Press says

    February 28, 2016 at 9:45 am

    I’m glad I found this story. It is memorable.

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