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The Moment

January 22, 2015 6 Comments

The Moment by Tony Press

By Tony Press

Nothing much happened in class today except when the girl from Pakistan walked in, just beating the tardy bell. She’s been here for three months but for the first time she had no head-cover. No hijab. We all stared, even the teacher, breathless and silent. She bypassed her second row desk to sit next to the tall boy from Peru who always sits by himself against the back wall. She took the chair tucked in the far corner between the file cabinets and the teacher’s desk. She took the chair and she took his hand. Oh, yes, his name is Jesus.

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  1. Clay Fulghum says

    January 22, 2015 at 9:43 am

    The story’s good. I had to read it twice. (If only assimilation was really this painless.)

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  2. paul beckman says

    January 22, 2015 at 11:18 am

    “Nothing much happened . . .” except for a total change of life and perspective for the entire class. Excellent.

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  3. Cristine A. Gruber says

    January 22, 2015 at 11:51 am

    Beautiful! Well done.

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  4. whitney peckman says

    January 23, 2015 at 7:20 am

    Have to think about this a bit. Will msg you privately.

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  5. Gerlinda says

    January 23, 2015 at 12:07 pm

    Tony, you are a rock superstar

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  6. Laura Lopez says

    January 23, 2015 at 4:09 pm

    This is a wonderful moment of perhaps solidarity across cultures but definitely of love between human beings. World Hijab Day is coming up on Feb 1st, the community, non-Muslim and Muslim alike, will wear hijab in solidarity — supporting a person’s right to express oneself and find this here in your words.

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