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The Mountain Goat Constituency

November 8, 2024 9 Comments

By Martin Tulton

They came from all over the mountain, gathering by the rocky outcrops and grassy knolls, in the crevices and on the ledges, quivering with hope. Nanny and Billy, surefooted, cloven-hooved, baa’d and grunted their greetings, gossiped their hopes.

“Sedge grass for all, I heard, with extra lichen.”

“Not interested if they can’t sort the snow leopard issue.”

The sound of a helicopter silenced them. They watched it land on the summit, gasping at the grey colossus it disgorged.

“I am one of you,” the figure declared, curling its trunk over a massive tusk, “and I promise to faithfully represent your concerns.”

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Comments

  1. Ephra Behn says

    November 8, 2024 at 11:51 am

    Riiight. See how that works out. Heh.

    Reply
  2. Heather says

    November 8, 2024 at 1:02 pm

    Poor goats :o(

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  3. Sue says

    November 13, 2024 at 12:04 pm

    Oh wow, absolutely love this.
    Guess the sheep will have to wait and see the outcome. Good luck.

    Reply
    • Lisa H. Owens says

      November 20, 2024 at 9:17 am

      Nice and subtle! Loved it.

      Reply
  4. Tracy says

    November 13, 2024 at 7:39 pm

    Oh, this is fabulous–thank you!

    Reply
  5. Margie says

    November 13, 2024 at 8:26 pm

    Hmmm…. got me thinking.

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  6. Ramona Taylor says

    November 14, 2024 at 10:02 pm

    Right on target! Keep up the good work. Thanks ?

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  7. Ramona Taylor says

    November 14, 2024 at 10:06 pm

    ^Thanks!

    Reply
  8. Kelly Louisa Balliu says

    November 15, 2024 at 2:23 am

    The scenery in this one made me think of Lord of the Flies (it had been on my mind since I had been going over some of the literature I studied for GCSE English) though with a much more lighthearted edge! Nice writing 😉

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