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The New Lock

November 28, 2018 10 Comments

The New Lock

By Ronald M. Larsen

My son put a new lock on the front door. “It’s to keep us all safe, Dad,” he said.

But he can’t fool me. I know he did it to keep me imprisoned in the house. Just because I went out to get the mail yesterday, took a short stroll, and had a little trouble finding my way home. That could happen to anyone, right? And my nephew found me and gave me a ride home, so what’s the big deal?

So maybe I’ve gotten a little forgetful. Well…maybe a lot forgetful.

Now, Doctor, what were we talking about again?

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  1. cascondaville says

    November 28, 2018 at 7:49 am

    True, and scary at the same time.

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  2. María says

    November 28, 2018 at 10:05 am

    Excellent!! Big delema between care and freedom!!!

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  3. b. says

    November 28, 2018 at 10:50 am

    Well written example of the new “normal.”

    Reply
  4. taekwondocathy says

    November 28, 2018 at 12:07 pm

    Timely and realistic for so many of us. Thank you.

    Reply
  5. Myrna Lende says

    November 28, 2018 at 2:16 pm

    Sounds vaguely familiar! Good one.

    Reply
  6. Jeff Stone says

    November 28, 2018 at 8:13 pm

    So many tough choices.

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  7. Pamela says

    November 29, 2018 at 7:47 am

    Good choice of examples to show the commonality of this issue. So many of us can relate.

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  8. Deborah Esling says

    November 29, 2018 at 8:03 am

    I love the way you illustrated the whole event in so few words. Good job!

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  9. Dan says

    December 5, 2018 at 2:05 pm

    Nicely done, but I’m pretty sure a lock like this would be illegal (fire codes). But narrator isn’t reliable.

    Reply
  10. Wiam Najjar says

    December 6, 2018 at 1:56 pm

    Love this!

    Reply

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