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The New Triage

February 19, 2016 4 Comments

The New Triage

By Tom Hadrava

Green, Dismissed—Nausea, stomachache, dizziness. Instant hair loss.

The virus is said to be alien, Chinese, or a bit of both. It’s very simple, not specialized, attacking seemingly random cell types. Bastard.

Red, Immediate—Stomach cramps. Intra-abdominal bleeding. Auditory hallucinations.

I get hit by the toxic wind on my way home, the filter in my face mask expired or a dud.

Black, Expectant—Confusion, then deep coma. Severe colourblindness. Heart failure.

I stumbleĀ andĀ fall. Hands hold me, then press me down. The sorting medical drone lands on my chest. It whirrs, scans, lights up. Only I can’t recognize the colour.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    February 19, 2016 at 10:57 am

    I like these science fiction stories graphically outlining the possible effects of pollution on our future world. Great job, Tom.

    Reply
    • Tom Hadrava says

      February 20, 2016 at 10:30 am

      Thank you! I really enjoyed thinking about the setting…

      Reply
  2. Sara says

    February 20, 2016 at 6:45 am

    Science fiction can be hard to do in 100 words, but you’ve nailed it with this piece. Good work!

    Reply
    • Tom Hadrava says

      February 20, 2016 at 10:30 am

      Thank you, Sara!:)

      Reply

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