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The Pearl’s Flaw

September 17, 2021 11 Comments

By Riley Odell

Empty space surrounds him. Passerby give him a wide berth. He is haggard and disheveled, his clothes tattered and stained. He wears a dog tag necklace and is missing his right arm. His cardboard sign reads, Please help.

Pearl Street’s shops and brick walkways are immaculate. Delicious smells waft from restaurants and bakeries. Children play near statues and fountains.

“Anything. Anyone,” the man pleads.

In response: Nothing; no one.

An emaciated cat limps from a nearby alley. People gather, drawn by the animal’s mewling. “How awful,” they say. Some stoop to pet the cat and feed it portions of their leftovers.

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Comments

  1. J Sagar says

    September 17, 2021 at 6:31 am

    Very thoughtful, Riley.
    Great piece.

    Reply
  2. Paul Lewthwaite says

    September 17, 2021 at 7:16 am

    A great read that highlights how weirdly, some people are more sympathetic towards animals rather than humans (disclosure: I love cats, so was happy this one was fed!). Very thought provoking!

    Reply
  3. Meghashri Dalvi says

    September 17, 2021 at 9:03 am

    A great story, perfectly told in just 101 words.

    Reply
  4. Nancy Ludmerer says

    September 17, 2021 at 9:33 am

    Great story.

    Reply
  5. Valli says

    September 17, 2021 at 10:47 am

    Good read… well done… the imagery is vivid and highlights a sad fact…

    Reply
  6. Michael Slagle says

    September 17, 2021 at 11:27 am

    A powerful social commentary in 101 words!

    Reply
  7. Helen Connell says

    September 17, 2021 at 12:05 pm

    This paints the stark reality of life for many people.

    Reply
  8. Liz Falkner says

    September 18, 2021 at 2:39 am

    Alas, horrifyingly true.
    Social comment in so few words… congratulations.

    Reply
  9. Veronique Aglat says

    September 22, 2021 at 10:08 am

    So very true.

    Reply
  10. dlherrmann says

    September 22, 2021 at 10:31 am

    Sickeningly real.

    Reply
  11. Deanna Salser says

    October 18, 2021 at 1:30 pm

    People are an enigma.

    Reply

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