By Don Tassone
He started running not knowing whether he could make it. He had never run in the Grand Canyon.
He expected the trail to be more gradual. He didn’t expect to see mountain lions, coyotes, and snakes.
Halfway there he ran out of water and his calves began cramping. But he pushed through, focusing on the pines and junipers along the rim up ahead.
And just when he felt he had nothing left, he reached it.
“You did it!” proclaimed an avatar on the screen, pumping his little fists.
Yeah, he said to himself, stepping off the treadmill.
Tomorrow, Glacier National Park.
This was an interesting read Don. Nice twist in the end. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Makes a statement about how we ‘run’ our lives and view the world these days. Interesting angle.
You had me at the end. Nice work!
Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great ending.
Nicely done.
Nice, I really liked it
This one hits a familiar to all us old treadmill cowboys! Good job.
Donald,
Did you know that your fascination for Rod Serling is showing through on
this story? What a great ending! Wasn’t looking for that.
Great read, as with all your other stories. Keep up the good work!
Love,
Your proud Mother