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The Sacrificial Man

December 24, 2014 3 Comments

The Sacrificial Man by Marilyn Braun

By Marilyn Braun

Watching beheadings turned Mathilde on.

Villars said he loved her. She demanded he prove it by offering one of his men for sacrifice. He duly complied. Ten minutes later the sacrificial man knelt before her. Villars and the headsman waited. The man, unrestrained and innocent of any crime, trembled but did not waver. Like Villars, his loyalty to his Queen was unquestioned. Even if it meant losing his head for her.

Her excitement grew. The men waited for her word. The headsman raised his blade. She cried out her assent and climaxed as the sacrificial man’s head fell for her pleasure.

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  1. paul beckman says

    December 24, 2014 at 6:39 am

    Great opening sentence. Good story.

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  2. Clay Fulghum says

    December 25, 2014 at 11:05 am

    I am grateful this writer was limited to 101 words.

    Reply
  3. Marilyn Braun says

    December 25, 2014 at 11:16 am

    Lol

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