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The Shower

April 11, 2016 6 Comments

The Shower

By Roy Dorman

Reggie Knowles stood under the waterfall letting the cool water wash away the dirt and sweat of the day into the nearby pool. A forced march through the steamy jungle on paths made barely passable by lush foliage had left him exhausted.

His captors sat in a circle on a rocky ledge sharing their food and water, along with the cigarettes they had taken from his pack. Through the roar of the falls he could hear the insistent screeching of a nearby jungle bird…

“Reggie! Reggie! You’ll miss your train into town if you don’t get out of the shower! Reggieeee!”

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  1. William Shaw says

    April 11, 2016 at 11:10 am

    Fantastic, love the twist!

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  2. Mike Haran says

    April 11, 2016 at 3:47 pm

    I was feeling depressed until I came to the ending

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  3. Jo Patterson says

    April 11, 2016 at 2:27 pm

    A good way to escape reality…love it !

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  4. Roy Dorman says

    April 11, 2016 at 3:13 pm

    Thanks for the comments, folks. Glad you liked it.

    Reply
  5. Bobby Warner says

    April 11, 2016 at 9:07 pm

    Imagination is a great way to pass the time–especially while taking a shower. Another twist ending that caught me unawares. Loved it!

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  6. Lynn Champion-Spouse says

    April 14, 2016 at 7:43 am

    I liked it too and loved the day dreaming.

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