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The Space Between

November 18, 2018 3 Comments

The Space Between

By Jake T.S. Wryte

Tessa wove in and out of traffic. If Dave beat her home he’d be suspicious, and she didn’t have enough makeup to cover what happened when Dave got suspicious.

Shoot! She shouldn’t have gone to see Toby. She’d felt so comfortable with him. Tessa glanced at the clock on the dash, cussed, and honked the horn as she sped past cars in the emergency lane.

Tessa’s car skidded to a halt in the driveway. She rushed to the door and dug in her purse for the house keys, but the door opened before she could find them.

Suspicious Dave was waiting.

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  1. Glenn Bowman says

    November 18, 2018 at 12:00 pm

    The truth always makes us come clean.

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  2. David Batteiger says

    November 18, 2018 at 12:07 pm

    Well done Jake. I can feel the tension as she’s searching for the keys. Can’t say I appreciate your choice of name for the antagonist though 😉

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  3. Gloria says

    November 19, 2018 at 2:07 am

    Wow …. Well Written …

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