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The Thief

December 15, 2024 12 Comments

By Janet Manders

Naked on the bed’s edge with tightly folded arms, he protests. “You can’t make me.”

My shoulders relax when he follows my soft singing, and me, towards the shower. Handing him soap, I pantomime washing. Words are too confusing.

I help him dress, gently comb his hair and hold up a hand-held mirror. An impish grin is reflected back.

He shuffles towards his threadbare recliner. Soft snores fill the air to join my heavy sighs.

Alzheimer’s has breached the door. The losses are many.

Holding the warm hand of the man I’m proud to call Dad, I smile. He’s still here.

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Comments

  1. Jan says

    December 15, 2024 at 8:09 am

    I love how this story reminds me to try to find positive, even uplifting, moments in bad situations. The words read like poetry.

    Reply
    • Janet says

      December 18, 2024 at 6:39 pm

      Thanks so much. It’s the philosophy I TRY to live by.
      Not always easy!!

      Reply
  2. Tamm Walters says

    December 15, 2024 at 1:17 pm

    Not only does this work as a flash piece, it reads like a beautiful prose poem. Love it!

    Reply
    • Janet says

      December 18, 2024 at 6:40 pm

      Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it

      Reply
  3. Bud says

    December 18, 2024 at 10:04 am

    Such a poignant story about a very difficult situation. Very well written!

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    • Janet says

      December 18, 2024 at 6:40 pm

      Thank you. Appreciate your kind words

      Reply
  4. Pat R. says

    December 18, 2024 at 10:39 am

    Just beautiful!

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    • Janet says

      December 18, 2024 at 6:40 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  5. Sue D says

    December 18, 2024 at 4:10 pm

    Well written. So many of us have been touched by dementia in its many forms.

    Reply
    • Janet says

      December 18, 2024 at 6:41 pm

      Dementia truly is a tough journey. And definitely experienced by many

      Reply
  6. Fay says

    December 18, 2024 at 9:12 pm

    Beautiful. Thank you!

    Reply
    • Janet says

      December 20, 2024 at 9:15 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply

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