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The Tracks

October 23, 2023 8 Comments

By Christopher J. Ananias

Young footsteps walk the parallel lines. The whiskey bottle floats from hand to hand. Amber liquid flashes in the sun. Our worn-out Nikes alternate the railroad ties. Sticky creosote stretches from my shoe, like black gum. I smell tar.

Ricky grins, stepping heel to toe on the tracks, arms hanging like a scarecrow. He veers, losing his balance, and hops down, like he’s done a thousand times. The sun’s so bright. A nonchalant wonder dances in the air.

It seemed for a moment I belonged. The four of us pass the whiskey. Tramping our way to Ricky’s, until he left, forever.

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  1. Carl Keefer says

    October 24, 2023 at 9:55 am

    Who hasn’t walked the tracks?

    Reply
    • Christopher Ananias says

      October 25, 2023 at 9:12 am

      I write, submit, (mostly rejected), sometimes surprised by acceptance. Then I awake to the occasional applause, or to the quiet-quiet silence, even worse to the rise of the heckler, yet nonplussed. I write again. Thanks.

      Reply
  2. Mike McCarty says

    October 25, 2023 at 8:48 am

    Wonderful description.

    Reply
    • Christopher Ananias says

      October 25, 2023 at 9:15 am

      Thanks, Mike!

      Reply
  3. Lisa Braithwaite says

    October 25, 2023 at 1:36 pm

    Beautiful story. I need to know what happened to Ricky.

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    • Christopher Ananias says

      October 25, 2023 at 2:24 pm

      Thanks, Lisa! I’ll have to think about that…

      Reply
  4. sharon strahand says

    October 26, 2023 at 4:22 am

    Great imagery – feels like somewhere in the US although I couldn’t say why!

    Reply
    • Christopher Ananias says

      October 26, 2023 at 7:18 am

      Thanks, Sharon!

      Reply

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