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The Visit with Dad

September 5, 2017 9 Comments

The Visit with Dad

By Ronald M. Larsen

I’d flown in to see Dad, possibly for the last time.

“Charlie, it’s bad,” my sister warned me. “He doesn’t remember much.”

She sat on one end of Dad’s bed while I sat in the only chair. I asked Dad how he was doing.

“Fine,” he replied.

“They taking good care of you?”

“Yes.”

My sister piped up, “Seen Charlie lately, Dad?”

“No, I don’t think I have,” he replied slowly.

She grinned at me, the little shit. “Dad, did you have any kids?”

“Well, there was Charlie and Frank, and I think there was another one.”

My turn to grin.

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  1. Joy Thomas says

    September 5, 2017 at 7:58 am

    Loved the twist in this story.

    Reply
  2. glkamens says

    September 5, 2017 at 11:33 am

    Grinning at the Grim! Jerry

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  3. Sandra says

    September 5, 2017 at 12:10 pm

    Great story, Ron! If I were a writer, I would have a similar story to tell! Glad we can laugh about it now.

    Reply
  4. Anita Bodle says

    September 5, 2017 at 12:10 pm

    Brilliant!

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  5. M Lende says

    September 5, 2017 at 12:29 pm

    I loved it! I would be so happy to spend one more day with Dad. We’d drink coffee and share a candy bar!

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  6. Bobby Warner says

    September 5, 2017 at 1:36 pm

    Touching. Vivid imagery; almost like I was there, listening. Liked it.

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  7. Vivian Satterwhite says

    September 5, 2017 at 4:52 pm

    Perfect!

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  8. David Silver says

    September 6, 2017 at 7:21 am

    Tee-hee. Delicious.

    Reply
  9. Tom Lauterback says

    September 25, 2017 at 8:43 pm

    Ron, touche’

    Reply

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