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The Wail

June 7, 2018 11 Comments

The Wail

By Anne Ejiegbu

“Push!” was the fuel that set Abike ablaze with the strength to deliver her long-awaited babe within minutes. She fumbled from the mat, ignoring the pool of blood and the awe-struck birth-attendant, agbebi, to examine him as he wailed. He was beautifully pink, hair like a raccoon, and eyebrows arched into a scowl as the wailing continued. Suddenly, she recognised the wail—the tune to the dirge she had sung for three other sons. His blood-stuck skin became cold as the wail ebbed; her eyes widened in terror. She grabbed the child, started running to find help from someone, anyone.

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  1. Tomi says

    June 7, 2018 at 11:39 am

    Nice

    Reply
  2. Mary says

    June 7, 2018 at 11:44 am

    Just beautiful! Kudos all the way

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    • Anne Ejiegbu says

      June 7, 2018 at 2:59 pm

      Thanks alot dear.

      Reply
  3. Anne Ejiegbu says

    June 7, 2018 at 1:00 pm

    Thanks alot. ?

    Reply
  4. Ellen says

    June 7, 2018 at 1:20 pm

    Beautifully written and so filled with emotion. Wonderful piece!

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    • Anne Ejiegbu says

      June 7, 2018 at 3:00 pm

      Thanks alot Ellen.

      Reply
  5. Zika says

    June 7, 2018 at 1:34 pm

    Where is the remaining??

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    • Anne Ejiegbu says

      June 7, 2018 at 3:00 pm

      Hope..fully.

      Reply
  6. Dare says

    June 7, 2018 at 6:40 pm

    Cool!

    Reply
  7. Yemi Sodipo says

    June 8, 2018 at 1:52 am

    The depth compensates for the brevity. Lovely work

    Reply
  8. Taiwo says

    June 10, 2018 at 6:12 pm

    Great one!…. It’s fine and the idea precise.

    Reply

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