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The Watchmaker

March 14, 2016 8 Comments

The Watchmaker

By Jonathan Shipley

When the watchmaker’s eyes began to fail, he knew time was short. He had been around so much gold all his life. He, himself, now silver. He, now tarnished gray. He never thought a day would come outside his workshop—never a minute without his staking set. Pin vises. Stumps. Jeweling anvils. And yet—his blur amidst the whir of the inner workings of time itself. He went to the ocean one day. Stood knee-deep in hope of some silence. The tide rose. He knew, of course, that the moon keeps time, too. That the waters rise to heaven’s besotted age.

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  1. Kirsty says

    March 14, 2016 at 9:03 am

    Absolutely adored it and learned about watch making – fab!

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  2. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 14, 2016 at 9:13 am

    Wasn’t that just beautiful?!

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  3. Smila W. Planete says

    March 14, 2016 at 10:04 am

    A wondrous prose poem! looking at time, standing in time, trying not to hear time… Your imagery is, in fact, timeless. Thank you for this!

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  4. jlcourtney says

    March 14, 2016 at 11:43 am

    Lovely!

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  5. Crystal Snoddon says

    March 14, 2016 at 1:35 pm

    loved the imagery!

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  6. Bobby Warner says

    March 14, 2016 at 8:10 pm

    Old watchmakers and old watches must eventually slow down then fall prey to the Tides of Time. Very observant story…wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing this. It’s a Winner.

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  7. Kerry E.B. Black says

    March 14, 2016 at 8:24 pm

    I really enjoyed this lyrical piece. Well worth the “time.”

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  8. Karen Saari says

    March 15, 2016 at 9:25 am

    Beautiful imagery, I really enjoyed this.

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