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The Way It Is

January 16, 2022 9 Comments

By Oliver J Batchelor

When I see you standing by the doorway, I feel a wave of relief. I was afraid you might not be there at all. Some people walk straight past you as if you are invisible or unimportant, but not me. You make me feel safe and able to carry on, quieting my fears, protecting me from danger.

I walk towards you with arms outstretched. Your cool gel drops onto the palms of my hands and I gently rub them together. They’re cleansed and shielded by your transparent screen. In these strange times, itโ€™s reassuring to find sanitizer at every shop entrance.

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  1. Helen C says

    January 16, 2022 at 7:05 am

    A lovely picture created!

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  2. Tim Goldstone says

    January 16, 2022 at 7:16 am

    Perfectly written. A brilliantly original take on covid.

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  3. Howard Humes says

    January 16, 2022 at 7:23 am

    Good one. Liked it very much.

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  4. Mary A Gorman says

    January 16, 2022 at 7:41 am

    Excellent full of feelings A great example of showing not telling

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  5. Roy Dorman says

    January 16, 2022 at 9:25 am

    Ode to a Sanitizer Dispenser? Love it. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Nina says

    January 16, 2022 at 9:11 pm

    You got me! This is perfect!

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  7. Indra Raj Pathak says

    January 17, 2022 at 9:20 am

    Lines show the lively picture. The outstanding setting of plot, scene, and sensuous words. Well done! Oliver.

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  8. Richard Temple says

    January 19, 2022 at 9:46 am

    Great concept. Maybe doesn’t even need the last line?

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  9. Denise D'Souza says

    January 19, 2022 at 9:54 am

    Good one, very relatable. The surprising misdirection was cleverly set up.

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