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The Weather House

November 18, 2021 10 Comments

By Bridget Holland

They shared the tiny chalet, together but apart.

She picnicked outside in sunshine while he was stuck indoors.

When it rained he flew out to shelter her, but she was whisked inside, her feet as trapped as his.

Then one day…

“It doesn’t work properly anyway. Throw it out.”

The world spun. He fell.

Blackness.

He wakes to find her beside him. His feet are free.

Hand in hand, they leave the ruined chalet. In the wide outside, rain slicks the pavement. He opens his umbrella. She opens her picnic basket.

Beneath the umbrella, the sun shines. She feeds him strawberries.

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Comments

  1. Tim Goldstone says

    November 18, 2021 at 7:19 am

    What a perfect use 101 words!

    Reply
  2. HelenC says

    November 18, 2021 at 7:32 am

    Lovely story ?

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  3. Liz says

    November 20, 2021 at 3:47 am

    Soooo sweet. Lived it.

    Reply
  4. Liz says

    November 20, 2021 at 3:47 am

    I meant LOVED it!

    Reply
  5. Bridget says

    November 21, 2021 at 9:54 am

    Thanks so much for your kind comments, everyone!

    Reply
  6. Liz says

    November 22, 2021 at 12:11 am

    Nice! Always wondered what those little figures got up to! 🙂

    Reply
  7. Mary Rohrer-Dann says

    November 24, 2021 at 8:37 am

    A tiny jewel, perfect in every facet.

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  8. Tracy Fells says

    November 24, 2021 at 8:52 am

    I loved this little story. It also took me right back to my childhood as we had a Weather Chalet just like this, I’d completely forgotten about it until now. Thank you!

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    • Bridget says

      November 25, 2021 at 2:28 am

      We didn’t have one, but we had friends who did, and I always wanted one.

      Reply
  9. Valli Henry-Boldini says

    November 26, 2021 at 7:17 am

    A cute little tale… their freedom at the end was lovely…well done… kudos …

    Reply

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