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The Weight

June 30, 2021 3 Comments

By Jessie Newton Huls

I carried twenty pounds of jumbo russets through the streets. When I passed our house, Momma whirled her finger to signal another lap, punishment for a missing necklace I didn’t take.

Mrs. Pernicek slowed her Volkswagen, her mouth like she’d sucked a lemon.

“What in heavens?” she said. “I’m calling the authorities.”

But I knew Momma was already in charge.

“It’s ok,” I said. “I’m reminded of why Jesus carried his cross.” I shifted the potatoes and smelled earth. “And being shown what it’s like to have a disobedient child who’s a burden.”

Authorities never came. They’d probably heard about Momma.

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  1. ruth mannino says

    June 30, 2021 at 10:09 am

    Love this Jessie!

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  2. Paul Corman says

    June 30, 2021 at 11:54 am

    A story with a beginning, middle, and end. Nice…

    Reply
  3. Deanna Salser says

    June 30, 2021 at 1:31 pm

    I had a momma myself so I empathize. Out of the eight of us, I was the scapegoat. But I’m strong as an ox now, inside and out. Everything for a reason!

    Reply

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