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The Witness

December 26, 2020 4 Comments

By Dhananjay Bapat

The teenager on the balcony overlooking the deserted swimming pool admired the girl’s dive and graceful freestyle strokes. When she was midway, a cobra slithered onto the water, sliding on a collision course with her.

His desperate screams proving futile, the teenager stiffened at the dreadful prospect of helplessly watching a horrible snake-bite fatality. Just then, a swallow-tailed kite swooped in a majestic arc, easily picked the cobra in its talons and rose into the sky.

The girl saw the applauding teenager while turning back at the other end, blissfully oblivious to the incredible show of destiny he had just witnessed.

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  1. Derek says

    December 26, 2020 at 10:42 am

    Bad news for the cobra though. A good story.

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    • Dhananjay Bapat says

      December 27, 2020 at 10:53 pm

      Thanks, Derek. Right observation!

      Reply
  2. AJ says

    December 26, 2020 at 10:50 am

    Great story! Seemed a bit theatrical at first, but something at the end just clicked perfectly.

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    • Dhananjay Bapat says

      December 27, 2020 at 10:52 pm

      Thanks, AJ. Appreciate your feedback.

      Reply

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