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Thermometers

July 29, 2019 6 Comments

Thermometers

By Nancy Linnon

She tells her therapist she doesn’t believe he wants her as a client.

“That’s a projection,” he says, crossing his legs. “Focus on what you are feeling when you’re with me. What does your body feel?”

She feels vulnerable. She feels scared. Her throat tightens. Her foot bounces. She longs for him to tell her how she feels.

He says: “You can’t put the thermometer in my mouth to see how you’re doing.”

That’s when she sees it—the parade of people in her life, thermometers dangling from their lips like cigarettes: How am I? How am I? How am I?

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  1. cascondaville says

    July 29, 2019 at 7:46 am

    Deep! Intense! Nice shocker there at the end.

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  2. Chad says

    July 29, 2019 at 3:05 pm

    Succinct writing that addresses the very human flaw of seeking approval/ affirmation from others. Kudos, Nancy.

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  3. Carol Sanders says

    July 29, 2019 at 6:58 pm

    Poignant and so true. Aren’t we all wondering how we are doing? Are we lovable? Are we capable? And what if we’re not?
    Great, thought-provoking story. I really like the thermometer image. Nicely done, Nancy!

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  4. Glenn Bowman says

    July 30, 2019 at 7:14 am

    That first look in the morror can be a gut-wrenching reality check; Great job, Nancy.

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  5. Jim Byrnes says

    July 30, 2019 at 8:57 am

    Perfect. Every word with a job to do.

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  6. Eric says

    July 30, 2019 at 12:46 pm

    Briliant work!

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