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Those Who Can, Do

May 21, 2015 8 Comments

Those Who Can, Do

By N.O.A. Rawle

He shuffles into my office, bastardized uniform fluttering like banners heralding rebellion.

The silence marks a stand-off in the duel that started in the class—his territory. He’s not on home ground now.

“Do you think I like having to call you here today?” I wield rhetoric like a true hero.

Dissent oozes from every pore.

Dumb insolence is overrated.

“Well?” Bulging corpuscles turn my forehead puce.

“I think,” he licks his lips, “It’s time I taught you a lesson.”

Despite the tentativeness with which he speaks, the knife that drives the words home shows the strength of his conviction.

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Comments

  1. Pat says

    May 21, 2015 at 5:53 am

    Wow, shocking stuff, excellent. Amazing to get it in 101 words!

    Reply
  2. N.O.A. says

    May 21, 2015 at 6:00 am

    Thanks Pat!

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    • maureen mooney says

      May 21, 2015 at 8:08 am

      Love the rich vocab. Very evocative,

      Reply
      • Naomi says

        May 21, 2015 at 2:39 pm

        Thank you so much!

        Reply
  3. JR Hampton says

    May 21, 2015 at 8:53 am

    Great story.

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  4. asgardana says

    May 21, 2015 at 8:56 am

    Wonderful story! So much suspense for 101 words.

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    • N.O.A. says

      May 21, 2015 at 2:43 pm

      JR Hampton & asgardana et al, thank you for the comments. Glad you enjoyed the read!

      Reply
  5. Alice E Keyes says

    October 27, 2015 at 6:14 am

    Nicely written. I’ve joined the 101 words and I’m looking forward to submitting something soon.

    Reply

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