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Time We Moved On

December 23, 2016 6 Comments

Time We Moved On

By John Holland

Sunday evening. They were sitting in the comfy armchairs in the window of the Royal Oak. She was leafing through Vogue. He scanned his Iphone.

He looked at her.

‘It’s time we moved on,’ he said.

She held his gaze.

“I know,” she said. “I feel so fucking miserable. I hate the thought of seeing you walk through the door every day. There’s nothing there. You must know I’m seeing someone else. I deserve love, don’t I? I’m not a bad person. You can’t say that, can you?”

“No,” he said. “I just meant let’s try the bar round the corner.”

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  1. Tone says

    December 23, 2016 at 10:27 am

    A moving story. We are different breeds. Nicely written, John.

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    • pleco2662 says

      December 24, 2016 at 1:12 am

      It’s intended to be funny. it only works if you can’t see the last line coming. I guess that will vary between readers.

      Reply
  2. Wolfe says

    December 23, 2016 at 11:14 am

    Perfect…….

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  3. Wolfe says

    December 23, 2016 at 11:26 am

    PERFECT?….!

    Reply
  4. Katlyn says

    December 26, 2016 at 2:25 pm

    Darkly funny!

    Reply
  5. pleco2662 says

    December 30, 2016 at 4:05 am

    Thanks Tone, Wolfe and Katlyn. John

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