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To Be Noticed

April 19, 2016 5 Comments

To Be Noticed

By Glenn B Miller

End of the month again…routine…day in…day out, 2015, 2016… Like glaciers crawling. Slow. Inevitable.

I lay motionless in bed. Staring at the ceiling…listening to the hum of the ancient, pre-digital alarm, unset. Waiting for each page to flip, signifying another minute gone by.

The toilet flushes upstairs. She is awake. The rush of water, wait for it. There it is. Shower begun.

Now, I get up and flush my own toilet.

Did it impact her pressure? A sudden burst of hot water? Did she notice? Does she know it was me?

That would make this day complete.

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  1. paulo brito (@OulipoBrat) says

    April 19, 2016 at 9:05 am

    Nice story. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Lynn Champion-Spouse says

    April 19, 2016 at 9:32 am

    Yearning, despair, hopelessness. Well done.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    April 19, 2016 at 10:36 am

    This tale is a perfect way of saying, If you don’t have the courage to introduce yourself, you’re doomed to forever shower alone. Good story, Glenn.

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  4. jeffswitt says

    April 19, 2016 at 12:48 pm

    Would be better without the opening para which added nothing. “Slow. Inev.table>”

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  5. jfxmcl says

    April 20, 2016 at 8:49 am

    Small victories … nice capture ,,, well done.

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