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To Have and To Hold

May 18, 2025 5 Comments

By Neil. B

I was best man at Mark’s wedding. My speech was well received. Bleary-eyed relatives shook my hand and poured drinks. I thought the job was done.

I needed fresh air, so I walked through the immaculate ornamental gardens and sat on a bench next to a koi pond. It was there I heard it. Moaning from behind a hedge, grunting, heavy panting. Fabric ripping. A zipper sliding. That distinctive laugh.

I rushed back into the hall, asked the bride for a dance, held her tight, all the while thinking, please don’t go outside. Please enjoy these precious moments while they last.

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  1. SwayambhuP says

    May 18, 2025 at 2:41 am

    You can really pack in quite a drama in 100 words! Great story!

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  2. Barry O'Farrell says

    May 18, 2025 at 8:43 pm

    The juxtaposition is classic. Well done.

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  3. Sharon Murphy says

    May 21, 2025 at 8:42 am

    Heavy best man responsibilities. Great story in so few words.

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  4. Ed Kratz says

    May 21, 2025 at 2:57 pm

    Great work. I agree. A big story in 100 words.

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  5. Lisa H. Owens says

    May 21, 2025 at 5:46 pm

    This made me kind of sad. It probably happens more often than we know… or want to know. Great job in evoking so much emotion in so few words, Neil.

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