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Tomasso

February 4, 2023 1 Comment

By Robin Ray

Tomasso owned loneliness like models own mirrors. At seventy-nine years old, with poor vision and hearing, an unnecessary eddy trapped him. He’d lived in this senior facility for a year, but the shackles of solitude eroded his ankles dermis by dermis.

I returned to this garden of elderly delights at 6 p.m. after my doctor diagnosed me with ennui. He claimed there was a cure, but Medicare won’t cover the prescription.

Entering the building, I saw Tomasso standing at the entrance to the empty dayroom.

“Anyone here?” he asked.

I should’ve approached him. Now who’s the one trapped in an eddy?

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  1. Wendy A Markel says

    February 8, 2023 at 8:39 am

    So sad, loneliness and wasted opportunity. Well written.

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