
By Jeffrey Paolano
In Walmart, Tommy finds the input, the content, and the socialization that allows for retention of his lucidity as he thwarts his creeping dementia. A kerfuffle disturbs Tommy’s cogitations. Smartphones flash photographs of a prone body. He straddles the body, yells “Call 9-1-1!”
With his left hand on the cataleptic chest and his right on top of the left, he pumps keeping pace with “Stayin’ Alive.”
Tommy melts into the crowd when the EMTs arrive, avoiding the scribes who, in his cynical opinion, never take action but insist on noting all the details.
Tommy blissfully remains in possession of his chutzpah.
Thanks for a great story Jeffrey, In my mind, I too have been there but could never have expressed it as you have.
Hey, wonderful, Jeffrey! Especially like the image of the guy pumping away in time with “Stayin’ Alive”! Pretty close to brilliant!
This is very good. Liked it a lot!!