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Treasure

December 1, 2017 4 Comments

Treasure

By Susi J Smith

The metal detector beeped excitedly before being thrown aside. Dave dug, fingers trembling. Wet sand was flung into the air before falling in tiny piles. He felt something hard. A stone? No, something else. Metal, curved. Pulling it free, Dave dramatically held it up to the sun. No glinting gold. No platinum bangle. Just a rusty old horse shoe, blocking out the light.

Dave stood, head bowed. His prize slipped from his fingers, landing with a thud.

β€œCan I have that?” She was tall, bronzed, blonde, buxom. β€œI could use it for my found art exhibition.”

Dave smiled, admiring his prize.

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  1. Vivian Satterwhite says

    December 1, 2017 at 6:36 pm

    Good!

    Reply
    • susijsmith says

      December 4, 2017 at 3:05 pm

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it πŸ™‚

      Reply
  2. dontassone says

    December 3, 2017 at 10:02 am

    “One man’s trash …” Love it.

    Reply
  3. lisa reily says

    December 18, 2017 at 5:22 am

    I read both your stories and enjoyed them. Congrats!

    Reply

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