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Trick, Every Time

November 29, 2017 11 Comments

Trick, Every Time

By Roz Levens

“Trick or treat?”

The door creaked open and the old lady smiled at the cheerful pumpkin child with his endearing orange and black face paint.

“Trick.”

Her hand shot out. Grabbing his wrist, she dragged him indoors.

“Gimme all yer stash, brat!” she snarled, pulling off her latex face to reveal the hag beneath.

Trembling, he offered the basket.

“And yer pockets!”

He complied.

“Boo!”

The child fled, howling.

Putting her feet up in front of the TV, she opened the first bag of sweets, awaiting the dual sugar hit of Bake Off and marshmallow monsters.

Halloween got better every year.

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Comments

  1. Meghashri says

    November 29, 2017 at 11:39 am

    Lovely!

    Reply
    • Roz Levens says

      November 30, 2017 at 3:09 am

      Thank you!

      Reply
  2. Bobby Warner says

    November 29, 2017 at 4:27 pm

    Wonderful post-Halloween story. Liked it.

    Reply
    • Roz Levens says

      November 29, 2017 at 5:51 pm

      Thanks! It was pre-Halloween when I sent it in!

      Reply
  3. David Silver says

    November 29, 2017 at 6:27 pm

    Fabulous.

    Reply
  4. glkamens says

    November 29, 2017 at 7:56 pm

    The hag (botox wouldn’t work) must be in a witness protection program if no irate parent can locate her. Jerry

    Reply
  5. Susan says

    November 29, 2017 at 9:35 pm

    What a wonderful tale!

    Reply
    • Roz Levens says

      December 3, 2017 at 3:12 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  6. Vivian Satterwhite says

    November 30, 2017 at 6:30 am

    So good!

    Reply
    • Roz Levens says

      December 3, 2017 at 3:12 pm

      Thank you Vivian!

      Reply
  7. Kathy Bracy says

    December 1, 2020 at 5:57 pm

    Love it, such a great Halloween story

    Reply

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