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Trudging

October 7, 2018 9 Comments

Trudging

By Ronald M. Larsen

On they trudged through the snow—the mouse who had once been Mighty in show business, and Irene, the aging hockey heiress who had yet to inherit even a hockey puck.

“Almost there, My Lady. We’ll get to the glorious green valley any minute now.”

She groaned and took another step.

They crossed a small ridge. In the distance a line of green pines beckoned.

Almost there. They quickened their pace.

Then a child giggled and gave the globe a good shaking. A blizzard of snow surrounded and blinded the intrepid trekkers.

Irene’s last intelligible words were, “Damn, I hate snow.”

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  1. Glenn Bowman says

    October 7, 2018 at 7:23 am

    Only The Indian in the Cupboard holds the key to this story.

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  2. cascondaville says

    October 7, 2018 at 10:54 am

    Darn shakers! It’s a never-ending journey! Good one! Love the twist!

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  3. Brian says

    October 7, 2018 at 2:02 pm

    Creative and charming story. I enjoyed it.

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  4. Myrna Lende says

    October 7, 2018 at 4:54 pm

    Good for you and your creative ability!!!

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  5. b. says

    October 7, 2018 at 8:10 pm

    I like the idea of thinking outside the box. Your idea – thinking inside the globe, brilliant!

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  6. Anna says

    October 8, 2018 at 8:07 am

    Great twist. I really enjoyed this one 🙂

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  7. dee says

    October 8, 2018 at 8:48 am

    the ongoing search for green and the snows keep coming. sigh. poor irene never had a chance.

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  8. Cangus says

    October 8, 2018 at 2:55 pm

    Excellent story. Great twist.

    Reply
  9. Susan says

    October 16, 2018 at 3:15 am

    Comical and clever!

    Reply

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