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Tulips

February 5, 2016 5 Comments

Tulips

By Bobby Warner

He sat in the garden, facing the tulips. They were beautiful, so perfect-looking they seemed unreal.

She stepped from the veranda and said, “Out here again, are you?” There was a scowl on her face.

“I am, indeed,” he said with a sigh.

“You know you shouldn’t be here.”

“Yes, I know,” he said, glancing over where the swing once stood, thinking of his son.

“You could have saved him, if you hadn’t been drinking.” She turned away.

“Don’t you think I know that,” he called after her.

He looked at the tulips again, noticing how they seemed to have wilted.

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  1. Jennifer Freed says

    February 5, 2016 at 9:27 am

    Wow. This is good.

    Reply
    • Bobby Warner says

      February 5, 2016 at 11:10 am

      Many thanks, Jennifer. Comments like yours are what help keep writers writing! Much appreciated.

      Reply
  2. lee d says

    February 5, 2016 at 1:53 pm

    Like this.

    Reply
    • Bobby Warner says

      February 5, 2016 at 7:53 pm

      Thanks for the kind words, Lee.

      Reply
  3. John La Briola says

    February 6, 2016 at 8:56 am

    Shades of Raymond Carver. Strong story, Bobby.

    Reply

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