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Turnabout

August 28, 2015 2 Comments

Turnabout

By Jim Freeze

The year is 1957, the morning of my first day in junior high. I walked to school, just as I had my first six years.

This morning is different though, having heard news of the underground tunnel all summer. The tunnel of violence and doom runs under a busy four-lane highway; by rule, it’s the only way you’re allowed to travel.

Darkness consumes my thoughts from the moment I begin my journey.

I approach the tunnel. Questions build. Be bold, or retreat? I convince myself to turn around. To go home.

Tomorrow will be a good day to start junior high.

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  1. Sue says

    August 30, 2015 at 6:27 pm

    Very good “feeling”of that stuff that we faced at an age when we had little control. Intense.

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  2. Roy Gomez says

    September 26, 2015 at 8:57 am

    Yes, that was junior high alright. Good job.

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