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Turnover

July 24, 2017 9 Comments

Turnover

By Rebecca Mix

When I create the golem the paint chips that were on my wrist speckle his face like tiny blue stars.

“Your name is Gretor,” I tell him.

“Gre-tor.” His words are slow, round, like he’s speaking through a mouthful of butter.

I pause. “I need you to kill someone, Gretor.”

A bead of clay rolls down his chin and plinks to the floor. Gretor frowns. “But… Gretor ar-tist…”

“For the love of—” I crush Gretor under my hands and tweeze out the paint chips. I’ve made a baker, a painter, and a veterinarian. Reliable hitmen are hard to come by lately.

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  1. Jack Spies says

    July 24, 2017 at 3:01 am

    A well done turnover at the beginning of the day goes down well. I loved it. Mix me another please, Ms Mix.

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  2. Ella Syverson says

    July 24, 2017 at 5:00 am

    Funny, simple, unexpected. Loved it!

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  3. b. says

    July 24, 2017 at 10:20 am

    Very clever and well written.

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  4. Anita Bodle says

    July 24, 2017 at 2:30 pm

    Great piece of writing.

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  5. Angel says

    July 24, 2017 at 5:38 pm

    Cute story with an unexpected ending. I loved it !

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  6. Kelsey Pfau says

    July 24, 2017 at 6:52 pm

    It was wonderful and I can’t wait to read more!!

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  7. Sam says

    July 24, 2017 at 8:13 pm

    You know, the veterinarian might have come in handy. You might have been a little to quick to get rid of her.

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  8. Lesley Mace says

    July 25, 2017 at 12:15 am

    Not a wasted word! Really enjoyed it – made me laugh!

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  9. Frank Hubeny says

    July 25, 2017 at 8:41 pm

    Unusual twist at the end. Nice.

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