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Two Moons

June 26, 2023 8 Comments

By Mary Daurio

I’m excited about giving a presentation to the Astronomical Society, showing my daguerreotype photographs of the Moon.

The telescope, what a marvelous invention. Its clear, curved lenses refract light and bring something far away close enough to feel touchable, like my neighbour through the window. Spying, I’d taken a picture of Mademoiselle Bellaire’s derriere. My little secret.

On arrival, I find the Society has provided an assistant. Excellent. I can concentrate on my speech while he sorts the daguerreotypes.

Uproarious laughter greets the first. “Professor, we weren’t expecting this orb.”

I look up at Mlle. Bellaire’s shining full moon. Secret’s out!

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  1. Doug Jacquier says

    June 26, 2023 at 10:56 am

    Highly amusing.

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  2. Mary Daurio says

    June 26, 2023 at 3:25 pm

    Dear Doug. Thanks for finding the humour, and commenting, Mary.

    Reply
  3. Cathryn says

    June 26, 2023 at 8:59 pm

    Hello Mary,
    Shining example of a perfect flash fiction piece! Loved it.

    Reply
  4. Bud says

    June 28, 2023 at 9:37 am

    Very funny.

    Reply
  5. Paul Scott Wood says

    June 28, 2023 at 10:05 am

    Funny thing about photographs is that the ones you want to keep safely tucked away are often the ones outed first. Amusing story.

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  6. David Higham says

    June 29, 2023 at 7:55 am

    I enjoyed knowing exactly what was going to happen and waiting to find out how. Lovely, straightforward writing.

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  7. Sandra L. Todd says

    July 4, 2023 at 8:44 pm

    Oops! You just never know who’s looking! Thank you.

    Reply
  8. Pamela Cartlidge says

    August 4, 2023 at 4:32 am

    Good twist. Very entertaining.

    Reply

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