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Two Steps to the Dream

April 22, 2025 2 Comments

By Olena Mylobog

Two steps to the dream top. The sun burns unbearably on my skin. The dense, sticky air penetrates my lungs and leaves a scent of bitter wormwood. I struggle with the weight of my body. My heart pounds in my ears.

One more step, and the sky laughs at me. The mountain valley, like a green sea, pulsates in the rhythm of the wind at my feet. The cries of birds are lost in the endless space. A minute of rest, and I’ll be on my way again. To the boundless peak, which melts in the watery veil of sweat-drenched eyes.

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  1. Dr. Joshua Furnell says

    April 23, 2025 at 8:49 am

    Very cool: a little Nietzsche, a little Cummings.

    “The mountain valley, like a green sea”

    I saw instantly the young shepherd referenced in Zarathustra:

    — (“I encountered a young man who looked wearily into the valley” [Thus Spoke Zarathustra, specifically the section titled “On the Preachers of Death”]

    The cries of birds are lost in the endless space

    (“Then shall i turn my face, and hear one bird/ sing terribly afar in the lost lands” [“It May Not Always Be So; And I Say.”])

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  2. Bud Pharo says

    April 25, 2025 at 7:47 am

    Beautifully descriptive.

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