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Ultimate Sale

February 1, 2016 10 Comments

Ultimate Sale

By Jon Nixon

Mid-life crisis beckoning, approaching forty.

Emotionally bankrupt and flat broke, I tried to sell my soul.

The bank didn’t see a viable investment—“But do take out a loan at an unaffordable rate of interest?” they begged.

Detroit and Motown didn’t want it—“You’ve not enough of it,” they grooved.

Social Media mocked the idea—“What a loser!” they trolled.

#Soulless—they tweeted.

Politicians showed interest—“Would take it (in return for a vote),” they argued. And lied.

Religion vied for it—“Not radical, needy or committed enough,” they preached.

Death just laughed. “It’s mine in the future anyway,” he assured.

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  1. ladyeclectia says

    February 1, 2016 at 9:50 am

    Really liked this Jon. Great concept concisely written.

    Reply
    • Jon Nixon says

      February 1, 2016 at 10:52 am

      Thank you….!

      Reply
  2. Denny E. Marshall says

    February 1, 2016 at 9:57 am

    A story with a lot of sou;

    Reply
    • Denny E. Marshall says

      February 1, 2016 at 9:59 am

      Soul (Sorry for spelling error)

      Reply
      • Jon Nixon says

        February 1, 2016 at 10:53 am

        Thanks for reading …!

        Reply
  3. Barry O'Farrell says

    February 1, 2016 at 4:04 pm

    So many facets covered in 100 words. It’s a gem!

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 1, 2016 at 7:20 pm

    A great last line, Jon. That says it all.

    Reply
  5. Vesna McMaster says

    February 1, 2016 at 7:43 pm

    Class act.

    Reply
  6. Jon Nixon says

    February 1, 2016 at 11:49 pm

    Thank you for all the positive comments – appreciated.

    Reply
  7. Mike Haran says

    February 2, 2016 at 8:50 am

    Raises the question of whether death can get the soul ,after all death deals with material things.

    Reply

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