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Ultramarine

January 30, 2016 3 Comments

Ultramarine

By Daniel Gooding

I don’t know who coined the phrase ‘turning the air blue,’ but they were certainly onto something. Not just any blue either, but a deep vibrant colour like twilight on some vital distant planet.

I’m sure there’s a name for it, but no one believed me when I told them. I just remember the sergeant standing there below the on-ramp, blasphemies coursing out of him like a broken air duct, “Fuck you smiling about, peckerwood?”

After a while I’d stop hearing him. It was like watching some thwarted octopod far beyond the sea, spraying his virulent ink into an unseeing sky…

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    January 30, 2016 at 9:16 am

    Good story, Dan, with excellent metaphors. “…some thwarted octopod far beyond the sea, spraying his virulent ink…” That’s gotta be a unique image.

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  2. pleco2662 says

    January 30, 2016 at 1:29 pm

    Great last line, Dan. Knock out. John

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  3. Jeanne Althouse says

    January 31, 2016 at 8:11 am

    One of the best this week. Original. Congrats

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