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Un-Rung

March 13, 2016 4 Comments

Un-Rung

By Sara Codair

Skis glide over jump; I soar for seven glorious seconds before gravity reminds me I can’t fly. It’s not fair: other half-angels have wings. Father claims I haven’t earned mine even though I heal people every week.

With a sigh, I scan the hill for my cousin and find her racing towards a tree.

I shout. She ignores me. I speed to her, tackling her into a soft snowbank seconds before impact.

When she doesn’t thank me, I read her mind. She’s disappointed, wishing the tree put her out of her misery.

Healing is more than mending bones, whispers Father’s voice.

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  1. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    March 13, 2016 at 9:09 am

    Very eerie and beautifully written.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    March 13, 2016 at 10:29 am

    Wow. This is a nice little sortie into the ESP realm. Or is that my imagination kicking in? However it is, I really liked this one.

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  3. Jennifer Freed says

    March 13, 2016 at 3:05 pm

    Wow. So much distance travelled in such a short space. Impressive. I liked this one a lot.

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  4. Sara says

    March 13, 2016 at 4:36 pm

    Thank you for the compliments! Bobby Warner – there is a bit of ESP in here. These are characters from my YA fantasy novel.

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