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Unfamiliar Unknown

January 30, 2020 8 Comments

Unfamiliar Unknown

By Jay Adair

A brain tumor.

Six months to live.

I hadn’t thought about death before my diagnosis, even as I am bombarded by news reports of the virus’ spread.

I had gone to Catholic school where they taught ‘creationism and heaven’ after breakfast and ‘evolution and eternal oblivion’ after lunch. I am still confused.

I visited my aunt after the virus got her. Strapped to the bed, eyes distant, teeth chattering. When I offered my arm, she hesitated before her new impulses took over and she saw meat.

Is it better to be undead than dead? As my mind fades, worry fades too.

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  1. lisafriedlanderlicsw says

    January 30, 2020 at 8:16 am

    Very atmospheric.Gives a feeling of dread. Only confusion is whether a virus would cause a tumor. Not the usual case.

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    • Jay Adair says

      January 30, 2020 at 9:48 am

      This is where word limits can be challenging! The virus actually did not cause the tumor – the MC was diagnosed around the same time that the virus was starting to appear, but they were completely separate events.

      Reply
  2. Jonathan Smith says

    January 30, 2020 at 8:32 am

    Very cool story – wish it didn’t end so I could read more!

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  3. Rachel Why says

    January 30, 2020 at 11:05 am

    Very well done! Would love to read more!

    Reply
  4. Scott Brian Blanke says

    January 30, 2020 at 2:27 pm

    Love zombie stories. Well done

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  5. Cathy Cade says

    January 31, 2020 at 8:10 am

    A conundrum! Nice concept.
    I got it, but did have to read back a sentence or two to confirm (but then I’m a terrible scanner). Perhaps separating the two references at the beginning might make it clearer?

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  6. Derek McMillan says

    February 1, 2020 at 6:46 am

    An excellent story. I speak as one who usually avoids zombies in fiction (and in real life).

    Reply
    • Kate says

      February 2, 2020 at 10:00 pm

      I had the same thoughts. 😉

      Reply

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