By Kent V Anderson
It’s Saturday morning and I’m in a toilet stall at our local pancake restaurant.
I’m afraid to leave. That’s because I’m a man, and I heard some women enter the restroom right after I entered this stall. Evidently I accidentally walked into the ladies room.
I overhear several of them discussing things that men never hear. Embarrassing things, I’m afraid.
I can’t believe it! Now I hear my wife, Sara, joining the conversation.
She says, “Frankly, I no longer enjoy making love. I find it quite boring.”
I sit motionless.
Then she adds, “It’s even worse when it’s with my husband.”
Wonderful, wonderful last line. This is a Winner!
Thank you! I’m now working on the screenplay.
Laughing my ass off!
Thanks! (Don’t hurt yourself.)
The twist at the end made me laugh.
Thank you. It’s funny now, but was sad then.
Wow!
Thanks!
Even though I like this flash story version, I am hopeful that the musical version will turn out as well.
Better stall your exit. I feel the pain
We didn’t stay married long after that.
Time to get up and apologize profusely as you leave. Let her wonder if you heard.
Good idea! I’ll be ready to try that, next time.
For Sara’s sake, I hope her lover wasn’t in one of the other stalls.
You’re right. At the time I was just thinking about myself.
This is an instant classic. Lol too!
Thank you very much!
Dang! This one’s good!
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it!