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USS New Jersey

January 12, 2016 3 Comments

USS New Jersey

By Manheim Wagner

“I’m not a veteran, but my brother is,” a chubby middle-aged guy proclaims.

Standing on one of the battleship’s 50-caliber gun batteries, with a pristine USS Saratoga hat on his head, he scans the tour group.

“Who here’s a veteran? Raise your hand!”

To my left, Paul, an Army Ranger who developed melanoma from exposure to depleted uranium in Operation Just Cause, kept his hands in his pockets.

And to my right, Lou, a Korean War veteran who told stories about Novalis and other German romantic poets, raised his hand, smiling in jest.

“Everyone, give this man a round of applause!”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    January 13, 2016 at 10:53 am

    A vet is a vet, whether he or she admits it or not. Just the way it goes. Good story, Manheim.

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  2. S.L. Kerns says

    January 13, 2016 at 4:18 pm

    Nicely done.

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  3. Sue says

    January 14, 2016 at 5:39 pm

    So well done for a complex subject. Good piece!

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