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Validation

February 23, 2018 4 Comments

Validation

By Lynda Kirby

The young investigative journalist peered through the lens of his old-fashioned camera at the American base. Discovered a mall café with anonymous faces and static images seated beneath a fluorescent glare. His shutter clicked a dozen times.

Crouching, he backed from his hiding place to his car. He drove past the Homeland Security sign declaring, Trespassers will be Detained.

At home, he pegged the developed film on the line grinning in triumph at pictures revealing the undercarriage of a spaceship above the theatrical café backdrop.

He failed to hear his front door splintering or the booted feet racing towards his darkroom.

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  1. Sue Stack says

    February 23, 2018 at 7:34 am

    How good is this? Amazing how much atmosphere and mystery there can be in so few words. Beautifully and skilfully written.

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  2. Kenny A Chaffin says

    February 23, 2018 at 8:09 am

    I Like it. Perhaps anticlimactic but well done!

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  3. rauthor68 says

    February 23, 2018 at 9:06 am

    Terrific story, Lynda. Ah, what happens next?

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    • Lynda Kirby says

      February 23, 2018 at 1:20 pm

      Thanks. Next is Fliss’s point of view, and 500 words. Then the military point of view at 1,000 words. And so it goes.

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