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Vanishing Point

January 1, 2018 8 Comments

Vanishing Point

By Duff Marshall

Initially, the signs were subtle. Neglecting to turn off the lights, misplacing car keys, forgetting their kids’ anniversaries. His wife dismissed the lapses, insisted they were cute, charming and certainly no need for concern.

Then, she noticed the ice-cube tray in the microwave, discovered bundles of cash in cereal boxes and witnessed the blank, bewildered expression on his face. Worry set in.

Later, she saw the fear and suspicion, as if he shared his life with a stranger, someone whose name he could scarcely recall.

Finally, she packed away memories, like precious jewels, for the time when he would have none.

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  1. Glenn Bowman says

    January 1, 2018 at 7:52 am

    Thank you Duff for your well-written story. If only our gray time of leaving was lovingly compressed into the brevity of 101 words. Instead, the death of a loved one may drag on for years.

    Reply
    • Duff says

      January 2, 2018 at 4:59 pm

      Thanks for your encouraging comments, Glenn. And you’re right. Dementia is a cruel and gruelling ailment.

      Reply
  2. Hazel Turner says

    January 1, 2018 at 10:05 am

    A lovely succinct way of telling the story of a loved one’s dementia. Well done

    Reply
    • Duff says

      January 2, 2018 at 5:01 pm

      I’m grateful for your kind comments, Hazel.

      Reply
  3. Jen HQ says

    January 2, 2018 at 11:24 am

    There is such sad beauty in this story. Thank you. I enjoyed it.

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    • Duff says

      January 2, 2018 at 5:03 pm

      You’re welcome, Jen. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts.

      Reply
  4. Alyson Faye says

    January 5, 2018 at 7:33 am

    touching and honest

    Reply
    • Duff says

      January 7, 2018 at 6:25 pm

      Thanks, Alyson.

      Reply

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